Good start. I have a few concerns, first, when you talk about that you"liked working with color scales...", that is incorrect. Obviously this is a black & white image. Please use the correct terminology. Second, please write out words completely this is not a text message! (U- you). Third, this is not a complete reflection. Describe the image-Boy, outdoors, literal. Interpret- B&W print, sharp or not sharp, 35mm, too dark or light. Good or bad exposure. Analyze- what are 'you'trying to say. Judge- was it successful or not? This is where your personal opinion comes in.
Good start. I have a few concerns, first, when you talk about that you"liked working with color scales...", that is incorrect. Obviously this is a black & white image. Please use the correct terminology. Second, please write out words completely this is not a text message! (U- you).
ReplyDeleteThird, this is not a complete reflection. Describe the image-Boy, outdoors, literal. Interpret- B&W print, sharp or not sharp, 35mm, too dark or light. Good or bad exposure.
Analyze- what are 'you'trying to say.
Judge- was it successful or not? This is where your personal opinion comes in.